Sleeping Valor

I'm glad you think she's like-able. I was thinking about her personality and got scared maybe she was kind of dull (not so much in the prologue, but in chapter ...

Tamora's very good at making sense. I didn't even realize I'd read the second book until I had finished it. She tends to do a quick review, so you should ...

Thanks guys! I know it's very choppy, I promise at some point I will fix that--just like all the other things I keep saying I will fix. I should probably ...

o_O What do you mean you've been updating this with new parts and no one told me??!?! Ten years after the rise of Lord Isaac, Aly Stowe awoke to the ...

Mwaha. Read it, liked it. No time to comment now, but I will come back! Oh! But you know, if you give it a rating then it will show up ...

lol. Cute. I liked it. I have a while file of little (very unsuccessful) dialogs that at the time were meant to be funny. =P Nice.

Oh wow. You went and dug this up from the bottom of the pile. =P I actually did continue this (over some 46+ pages >.

Winds sounded and fearful screams were on the tip on hundreds of tongues. Dark energy concentrated [s]onto[/s] in the palm of a shady and gloomy figure. He twirled his hands ...

:D I think I am really very spoiled. Everyone who comments seems to like my story. XD Thanks for the comments everyone! I appreciate you all reading through this whole ...

:D Yay! More comments. *happy dance* Thanks for your input kitty and bigbad! I'll make those changes as soon as I can. (might be sooner than I'd like, I'm a ...

I'm glad you liked it. And yeah, I've been reading through the many pages I wrote of this story and there are a lot of run on sentences. =P (You ...

Mwaha. I'm back. ^_^ I was unaware of the bustling people surrounding me. A teenage boy, obviously in a hurry to get someplace unimportant [but it must be important if ...

Had someone told Johnny that “Can you please take Sandra Tscarediway to 57 Rosebend Avenue?” was a question to which he should answer no if he valued his peace of ...

=P I won't do another inch by inch commentary, because I don't really see any new issues that I didn't address in my last one. I'd still add more detail, ...

Lightning flashed, the sound of an [you could say 'the' army, since you are talking about a specific one] army's horses beating across the barren landscape. Even with the heavy ...